by Cindy
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Debbie |
by Rachel RTVW
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Very beautiful yet full of sad emotion. Heartfelt and nicely penned. Excellent job. 100/5 from your #1 fan!! |
by Tara Kay
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Well done. I loved this poem, it was so short, so sweet, and really powerful. |
by Barry
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Soooo beautiful...... |
by Barry
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So beautiful..... |
by Robie Lincer
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This is a really nice poem! |
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Very nicely written, I wish it didn't end so soon. The flow as well as the structure was great. And your wording was outstanding. Keep up the amazing work. |
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Abstractly Tangible ,Effectively Visual..I enjoyed reading this aloud.......Well-Done! |
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I want to see more lol. 5/5 |
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Another very good poem debbie, such discription in your poem, and the flow is perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
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That was very beautiful. Nice job. |
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Great poem, short but powerful. Good job. |
by Liz
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NO! Why'd it end!?!?! AH! Debbie, I loved this poem. This is one of the best poems I've read in such a long time. I don't even know what to say. this was just beautiful. FHSDFSd. I wish I could seriously say something better. But I just...wow. This was amazing. Never stop writing! |
by Kurt
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This was written with incredible skill. The words flowed and the whole poem radiated with emotion and feeling. This poem was truly amazing and I am stunned by this spectacular piece of work. Great great job. |
by Boy
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That was. a good poem.. realy gr8 wrk |
by kim
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Wow, your amazing, i love writing, and your my inspiration! |
by ben thompson
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Very well worded. great write. 5/5 |
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I have to be a fool for not reading it so far...this is just an outstanding and an amazing poem, usage of words and the picture it potrays just take you to some other world....and its surely a nice feeling. |
by Pheadrah
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One Beauty..powerful written, don't stop writing , we love your work |
by Cindy
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Congrats Deb! |