Wow very powerfull i enjoyed reading it :))

Wow your work is so amazing, You really seem to have an insight into such a tragic events.
"His body was numb
As the bright light came
His mom didn't stop
And God called his name"
there is certain stanza's in your work which just take my breath away and the above is one of them. A very very sad and emotional piece. Hard to get so much emotion across but amazingly done.

Kelly
xx

This is an amazing piece of poetry. by far on of the best i've read. i love it. 5/5.

great job && keep it up

much love,
mac.

just another silly teenage girl.</3

Oh my god!!
that's horrible..the poem is amazing..but is that true?! can moms do so?! what was she blind!!
i was deeeeeeeeeply touched by this poem i'm really sad 4 that boy :'( if there r such moms they should be sent to prison r something..or get cured..