Rachel
Beautiful job! The word choices are amazing. You have done a outstanding job on this one. Thinking of you! Love Cindy

That was great. I loved it.

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yes you did write it for a contest.. and i loved it.. if my was favorite.. hence first place.. congratulations.. and spectacular write

That was really good! I liked it!

COOL WRITE. GREAT WORK!

Amazing, great work.

I loved this. so sweet. well done hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

This is beautifully written great job.

Wow - that was probably the best flowing triolet I've read (some of them try to fit into the pattern so much that they become incomprehensible!)

This one deserved first place!

This was a lovely poem in every way, I look forward to your next. Timothy r

Mmmmmm.......I like.....

5.....winner