I really liked this poem!
Its well written and i liked the way u asked the questions .. and the repition of stanza !
But i think you should make it a bit longer !
Otherwise it was great ^_^ i enjoyed it!

Keep Smiling xx

Thank u. i will definatly try and make it longer. :)

Great song. It was flawless. Not much that I can say.......

Sorry for the short comment.

5/5
~Stephen White

I loved this 1..the way u've questioned is great....it's better the way it is....beautiful!
Kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Thank u very much. ive written more to it but i have yet to add it on the computer.lol.