Comments : The Only Thing That Keeps Me Up, When I'm Feeling Down

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Based on a fight that I had with one of Ians friends, and when ever I think of my ex or I let somethign botehr me, whenever he pulls me close and tells me everythings gonna be okay its liike the onyl thing that makes me feel better..i mean my friends can try and cheer me up but its hte sound of his voice nad the way h does it that keeps me up when Im feeling down.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shanyez

    I dont like to read these types of poems that much but i enjoyed your, good work.