That is such an excellent poem. I love the whole concept and how it all maps out. The plot flowed very well, telling a story of heartbreak in a very unique way. You used good vocab, expressed your emotion nicely without over doing it, and it flowed well, with a strong ending. One of my favorites of yours definately. I like to read a poem that is unique and isn't only about having a broken heart, but breaking one too. Excellent job as usual. =] 5/5

Much love,
Tammie xo

Good job sore. I'm proud of you on this one. I havn't been on lately i know. I have added a few on though. 2 of which are quite long. let me know what you think. by the way i gave you a five. some of the rhyming is off but i do the same thing so splah.