I really liked this...it had a lot of emotion and a sad story behind it all so definitely 5/5 keep it up
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I really liked this...it had a lot of emotion and a sad story behind it all so definitely 5/5 keep it up
x!x

"At four years old
And much too young
She lost her life
Which had barely begun."
The beginning is so good, it really makes you want to read the rest of it. =) And the rest is good as well! Keep it up! xxx

Ur poem is soo emotional.....it tells a story...which makes it come alive......its truly deep.......the beginning starts it off wonderfully...keep writing...ur a natural........beautifully worded.......