Comments : Misspoken Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by CJ Quintanilla

    This is good....like really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    Have you ever realised suddenly that God is trying to get a message through to you? I read your poem, and had the odd wonderful feeling that it was coming from God through your writing. I've been struggling with depression for a while now, and suicide has often seemed like the only option. I have been searching for answers and meaning, and I think I just might have found it. So thank you, for sharing your poem. Its great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Yeah, you showed me this poem and truly I really liked it. Im sure many people feel the same things in this poem and can really relate. If they read this it might help them through with whatever they are going through because it has really good wording and rhyming. nice work, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this poem it is excellent thats y it won 2nd place in my contest

  • 16 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    Wow you wouldn't believe how much I love this poem it is really good best one I have seen so far on here!
    Much Love!

  • 15 years ago

    by Asher

    Beautiful...
    ((5))

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    This is a really good poem...i like it alot...5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by H E Losey

    I understand your story but, to me, your rhythm is all over the place making it a difficult read.

  • 13 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Loved this! So beautiful :)

  • 13 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Loved this! So beautiful :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren

    Not only are you attractive, you can write. this was quite exquisite.

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I really like this poem :)