Good poem, nice imagry. Yup...

~Alicia

This is greatt. i can really relate 2 this but not the ocean. more likely a knife or somethin. great job. 5/5

Wow. this is a beautiful poem with great imagery. the personifications blew my mind away. out of curiosity is it just about the stormish sort of thing or is it ambiguis for something else aswell?

Thank you all for your comments! and yes, the poem is also a metaphor (i love writing metaphors :) loll)