This is so true. Times really have changed and many times you have to wonder if it really is for the best.

Great way to express it. I really liked this.

Cindy & Bill

Well done and thoughtful write....

Hoping we can change things before it's too late
We need to Take the time for our families once more
Turning off the televisions,video games, cell phones
Let's try to bring back more of the forgotten days
Teaching our children how to love, laugh, and play

Love this end verse! 5/5 Debbie

Cindy, I enjoyed writing this with you and stand in awe of your talent. Thank you for the opportunity to write with you.

What you mentioned here is a very serious problem for sure. Day by day we are losing ourselves and depending so much on these gadgets.....soon we will have electronic soul too...i guess.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

The truth told as it is, i miss that too, and when someone comes and tells it that way it just brings me hope. great work.

I liked this, it reminds me of a problem I've always wanted to write about but could never put the words together. I'll probably save this page and be inspired later, thanks.

Wow i love this ur an awsome writer

Great poem thanks for your comment on Dear God Thank you

This poem is beautifully written, and filled with so much truth.
I loved this, you guys did a wonderful job together.

Sad but true:(