This has to be my favourite so far.
The first stanza had me hooked and while I didn't want this to end, when it did I wasn't disappointed.
The last stanza was beautiful, I found it to be very moving.
All I can say about this is that it was perfect.

Who cares bout the poem? the heading brought me too it. i loved it. it so stood out. but also the poem was perfect! bravo!

5/5 David

Wow, this is amazing. It brought tears to my eyes. I can deffinitley & totally relate to this. It was so wonderfully written.. BUT SOOO sad. Every stanza was more & more beautiful.

Amazing, dear.

Bri [x]

Nice rhyming! I loved this poem it's on of my favorites from you great job!