Gorgeous honey!
But of course i can't really comment on the poem cos i co-wrote it, but the parts you did?
Amazing!! lol
Of course, i'm biased with anything you write, lol
Great work honey
Love you xx

Lol i think this was really cool poem, i love how you've wrote it, 5/5 good idea

Very catchy ,I loved the line about the mirror,not that it fit me or anything.....lol

I liked the part about the TV

Congrats on getting the front page honey!
You so deserve it =)
Love you xxx

LOL truly funny it's great

This is an awesome poem good job to both of you

Koole!

It was like a mix of sadness and humor

Haha this is sooo awesome! great job, i can tell you put a ton of thought into this!!! SaWEET!
~Amy~

Marcus
This is a very funny way of looking at things. You and Gem did a excellent job on this. 5/5 Take Care Cindy

This poem is very catchy..... I like it.

You're doing well honey
Keep it up
Love Gem xxx

Why'd you put that under funny? I woulda chosen love poems.

GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is very good! 5/5

Haha! This is clever. I liked it.

Totally cute...yet sad and mixed with happiness at the same time.... ~.:.tara.:.

Haha. This was really cute. I think I liked the toaster and pillow parts best, they made me giggle.Lol.

I loved it!
Keep it up.
5/5

Very clever :] liked it 5/5