I really love this poem, it has such an honest vibe. I know what you are trying to say, but make it blend more n the last sentence and a half. Because you read a really good poem it keeps going and then it just goes bla........ I mean sad? wheres the fabulous fantastic ending? everyone poem has to have an ending....
eg:
"now its here to day were i still lay,
Thinking in my head,
I still love her and I want to be with her,
Even if she doesn't see,
The best 'type' she will ever see"

or something like that. =)
and set your sentences out nicely........ it would make it way better
good luck, loved it
kac xxx