Comments : Deciet

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was good, too. You seemed to be rhyming in an
    A
    A
    B
    B
    style.

    It's like your on a bad trip, day in, day out..
    Acting like our hearts will melt..

    This jumped out at me because it didn't fit what you were doing. It was still good though. Keep up the good wokr. *5/5*