Very beautiful write.

Very beautiful write.

Sorry, but this is another example of your smart and sincere skill being skittled by an abruptness that leaves me feeling shortchanged. I am DYING to read something of yours that takes me on a journey or paints me a picture of depth and beauty.

Keep 'em coming though! I am not trying to knock you down, I am trying to build you up! :-)

Small but good. I can really add onto what is there even after the poem is done.