"Dreaming
Conceding trust
Refusing to exile hope
Along with love's rubble"
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^^ I loved those lines, Debbie. This poem was very unique. I don't think I've read anything quite like this one. Well, all your poems are unique. That's why they're so special. This was an amazing write, Debbie. I love it! 5/5

-` Liz

Debbie,
You always amaze me. This is very good. Word choices are excellent. 5/5 Love you Cindy

Well done, a lovely poem.
good wording throughout, keep it up
love Tara-Kay
-*Taz*-

I really like this poem.

As I read this I had a feeling....so I began to mentally rearrange the lines in various orders, randomly sequenced.....The feeling waas true..;-)...No matter what order I placed the lines....it all still made sense!....Good show!.....

You really seems to have a poetic blood.. :o) Its really very unique, the pattern...selection of words and the image..altogether its all so beautiful.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

Nicely done. Different style from you but I like it a lot! You shine with talent!

"Refusing to exile hope
Along with love's rubble"

Amazing Deb, i feel like i haven't seen your work in ages and this was a lovely piece to get in the swing of things with.
I loved the structure and how each stanza seemed to have a different message
Wonderful piece
5/5
*Gem*

Well done! i have to give you that. the only thing that i was dissapointed with was that the rating is low. it should be all 5! keep writing, i am in your club now.

5/5 David