Stay here with me
Help to keep me strong
Hold me so tightly
In your arms I belong

i liked these words allot. your al poem was so good. and rhyming scehems were also nice... i can feel the things in your poem. goodl uck take care

Oh, that was so heartfelt. All your poems describe the beautiful you have. Be strong and cherish the memories.

Cindy this is so beautiful. Really nice feeling to this one....good flow and rhyme.

Stay here with me
Fill my endless nights
Protect me from shadows
Till dawn shines its light

This verse was outstanding! Love you! Debbie

Wow..You're really good!!After all you've been trough , you still write excellent!! Beautiful 5/5!

Though i love all of ur poems...but poems with this sort of theme....i just love them.....i so very much adore ur love poems

Stay here with me
Help to keep me strong
Hold me so tightly
In your arms I belong

lovely write indeed

all the best and take care

Again Cindy, you captured so much emotion with your words.
loved every part of this one.
love your friend, Tara-Kay

Again... tears! i can feel your sadness in your writtin... and at the same time... i also feel he is waiting for you on the other side nana!!! love you

GOOD FLOW EXCELLENT WRITE. BEAUTIFUL

Hello Cindy,

I hope this finds you better...

This is heart wrenching poem, pleading for support, for love. It is bitterly sad as one should never have to ask, let alone 'beg'.

I like the alternating refrain. This is clever and I have never thought of doing this and may do in the future.

Take care Cindy, always hold on.

Michael ((hugs))