Awww sad but brilliant poem! it says so much in a few words! you did a such a good job on it! 5/5

~Kristina

Well written and heart felt, a sad yet well written poem keep it up and i will check out more as i go thanks,

My soul that had been tossed
My spirit that had been bound

I love those lines . I`m just like whoa . It was short, but the lines have power . Love it (:
..__MiNDYY

Wow. This was amazing. It was written so well. I'm like.. speechless ahaha. This was really different. It flowed so well. & It was just.. woah, lol. It was really heartfelt & had a lot of emotions in it. I love the last two couplets.. amazing. :]

Beautifully penned.

Bri [x]