I wud care cos im ur friend and if d gurl dnt love you,ur gotta move on sweety,u just gotta or do sth bout it anything but harm urself.take care.
Luv Kate

I would so care if u were gone!!

Good job, It does kinda sound like mine! I would care! Don't ever kill yourself! is there really a loaded gun under your bed? if so don't use it for that, 5/5 its an awsome poem!
lov ya

I like your writing
you should look at mine too
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