Sensual Beauty

by Hans Fausto   Feb 17, 2007


I know of a rose
who knows no description
but of a beauty stored at heart

a Rose so warm to touch
like a mothers embrace
love instilling, everlasting

I know of a Rose
who's eyes gleam endlessly
like the embers of a calm flame

A rose who's voice is
tender as the fleeting wind
never changing, everlasting

I know of a Rose
with a taste oh so sweet
like a kiss so warm and moist

A rose with a scent
which lay in a meadow
of a thousand roses

I know of a rose
who's beauty's seen through the eyes of all
but with true beauty seen through the eyes of the heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really nice poem. it is sweet and beautiful. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very beautiful and eloquent descriptions here.
    Quite different to many love poems on this site, it has a delicate sincerety about it.
    I know capitalisation is sometimes used for effect, though I couldn't quite grasp the purpose of it here. In some places rose was capitalised, and in others, is was not. And there is no clear pattern to it either.
    I'd normally suggest punctuation, but that isn't completely necessary here - it flows nicely. The one thing that did hinder the flow though was the offbeat format of the last couple of lines. It spoilt the ending for me.
    Above all, an enjoyable read, just some issues you could work on.