Nicely done, its got a good story behind it, but remember, the best things to right about are the things that impact you the most... nice 4/5
-Marina..

Wow, good poem. don't be too harsh on marina, the poem explained a lot. it wasnt her fault.

No i dont mean this poem. soz for the misunderstanding.. neway dont think i said before but this poem is wow. you should right more so i can comment or maybe i can't see your other poems cuz of the glitches. hmmmm.