I love this poem very much, Yuna! When I read it, I can imagine everything that is happening, and it makes me smile when I think of Syaoran being happy. I think that his dad, Fujitaka, was one of the only ones that made him happy... apart from Fai, Kurogane, and Sakura. Great job on this poem, and I even favorited it! I love it, so keep up the great work!
5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist