Cute poem short but to the point :)

Good ideas but you should add some stuff; give examples or something. and maybe use Images to convey what you're feeling. Otherwise this just looks like you're talking to a friend, not so poetic yet. Poetry is about sharing experiences through words, so kinda step back, maybe, and think: What's the best way to describe this to where if a stranger read it they'd get a sense of ewhat i meant, how i felt, even what I was thinking (without exactly syaing it)

Not quite what I expected but I could tell you put some effort into it. Keep it up. 5/5