I liked this one too. It blended together so nicely. And the message was true.

I tried to make it flow, but it seemed like I was changing the story idea too much. I think that I could write it better, so look out for "What becomes of snow" *Better version* :D

Um. My apologies. But I'm afraid I don't find its flow particularly irregular or unsmooth. Perhaps that's just me. :P

As always, your works never cease to induce a sense of enchantment in me. I really like that! Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poem of yours.

-Debbie Marian (^^,)

I know that saying of Fruits Basket ^^ I'm gald you put it in a poem, it sounds wonderful 5/5