I liked this poem a lot! You know, at the end, it reminded me of "The mummy". I don't know why. But overall great poem!

This is a good poem i can relate to how you feel in this poem. its really good. i like your poems they are good.

I like this poem it was very nice!!! =D

I really love this part

I want to be with him,
Is that such a crime,
To ask for something,
That I'll never obtain,
Not even at the end of time?

:)

That is so cute. Keep up the good work. :) Xx Chrissie...and i loved the last stanza

I really like this poem
its exactly how i sometimes feel