Lovely......and Deep.

Debbie,
This is so beautiful and so sad. The poem just pulls you right in. Your word choices are so wonderful. You have written a excellent piece here. ~Bravo~
Love You Cindy

BEAUTIFUL VERSES. GREAT WRITE

Who ever downvoted this is an idiot...but votes don't really matter...especially with such a beautiful poem like yours. This was so amazing. I love how you wrote this. I'm really at a loss for words. I just love your poetry. Beautiful write!

-` Liz

Beautiful

'As tears frozen in time
Deep and lonely
'Til ocean is river
And you become mine '

Passionate.. I really love it Debbie,
Keep it up and take care.. Pheadrah

Your poems are always beautifully worded and full of emotion. EXCELLENT JOB. Whoever voted this down is jealous!!!

Dramatic
Enchanting
Believing
Best
Young
Levitating
Yostentating
Naturally talented

you are the best writer who has ever hypnotized us by your unicness

This is the best one i have read for a very long time....everything abt it is just so poetic and thats what we are supposed to find in this site.. :o)

very nicely written indeed

all the best and take care

This was really beautiful and so nicely written. Great job.

Llllllllooooovvvveeeeeee IT !
^-^

A beautifully romantic write, You can feel the intensity as you read, Wonderful.

Very well done. I enjoyed the whole set-up and how well the poem flowed. It created, in the end, a very good poem!

Awwwwwwwww. such a gr8 writing. such a gr8 talent. very good and nicely done too. i am after reading this and found the reason tht y i write poems. gd luck take care

Nice poem, greatly written yet i dont know why is it downvoted, i think it is no fair that some irresponsible person's rate a great poem like that, it shows they have no idea what the art of poetry means, im wondering what those ppl doing here waisting their time.

Excellent write, I wish it was longer. The flow was good and the strucutre too. Keep the great work coming.

Peace, Joe

Debbie computer gone down....sorry!!!!
A Poem's kiss
Flows from my pen
To your heart
Lingering, longing
As a silent embrace
Though we're apart

Our words touch
As lips, softly searching
Verses thrill the soul
Separation of One
In lonely sky blue
Until we are whole

Sorrows in stanzas
Writ with abundance
As tears frozen in time
Deep and lonely
'Til ocean is river
And you become mine
this poem is sensational.....
why pick a line take it all.....like I have

So beautiful.....this poem is just something else.......

As tears frozen in time
Deep and lonely
'Til ocean is river
And you become mine
....oh! beautiful...... heartbreak

I loved the ending. for this poem ended just right. i loved the way it biult up to it. bravo!

5/5 David