Omg... this is so terribly sad...I loved it you have a great artistic ability...it was very good and creative..you did a great job!

Wonderful. I loved the thought of this poem. You did a great job writing about the twin towers and saving some ones life. Very well written. 5/5 keep it up

A beautfully penned poem. I'm sure we all remember that day well, due to it's awfully tragic circumstances. It nearly made me cry, reading your poem.

Keep up the good work.

"I got up and get dressed and was ready to got." it should say "I got up and got dressed" .. and im not sure but I thought that there were only two towers not three and you said the third tower. Nice work though the message in this was so sad especailly since a lot of people actually had to live through this and will continue to live with this the rest of their lives. Good job and very sweet message.