Comments : She's Dying Inside

  • 17 years ago

    by anna

    Good job it flowed together nicley. keep up the great work
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this poem is sad!=[ but it is still very good writing! i love it. keep uo the good work. i gave this poem a 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by anna

    Great pome keep up the good work
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fluffy

    A profound piece with a strong message. Nicely structured and good use of rhyme. Try extending the sentences; it will turn out to read more effectively. Well done :)