Awesome job. very emotional...keep it up

It is WAY beyond me why there isn't more votes/comments on this one, I loved it. It's from before you started entering into my contests so I haven't read a lot of your earlier work but wow, this is really good!

"Life's just diamonds scratching hearts,
And aces buried by spades."

^^ Those two lines blew me away, they're amazing.

5.5
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<3