Comments : Falling child

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good poem terra, last sentence has a little typo in a word, i give it a 5/5!!! miss yall at the club, keep it up!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Terra dear, i liked this one. You have such an interesting writing style; it's very unique. I give it a 5/5 like Bryan did. c[:

    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    It is a very good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This is a VERY good poem
    i loved the flow and it
    all fit in

    "Majestic heart
    Hidden beneath the soul
    What is your secret? "

    this is the best part ^^

    5/5