Hearts are stired with words such as these Tim. All that I can say is that this is a true masterwork.

Good to have you back.

Love how you formed this piece. It really made me take my time with it and really absorb the words...

I like the poem structure and the repetitive style. You truyl are a one of a kind writer and your talen tshines through with every write.

Wow! This repetition made so powerful rhythm and you truly wrote this poem on a fantastic way.
Bravo, very remarkable and original piece, it is filled with intense overwhelming tone of revolution.
I enjoyed in every line, good choice of words too, very creative piece, well done.