This is a good begining.. if you get stuck start a new one that is what i do..and if you think of somthing then add it.. that is what i do.. its good to experiment =D

I think its really good but if you can't get with the flw hy don't you open the poem in a different way. you can use that in a later verse? Would that be easier in any way. I so that sometimes and it helps. It's gr8 tho. x

I think its really good but if you can't get with the flw hy don't you open the poem in a different way. you can use that in a later verse? Would that be easier in any way. I so that sometimes and it helps. It's gr8 tho. x