Great pome. I can never get enough depressing things. But parents thing you go loopy when the 'accidently' com upon one of you odd pomes at tells you there to graphic. Well hell with them. Keep up the gret pomes, there great.
Ivy

Very good way to express some deep emotions.
Negative or not.
Amazingly written.
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Wow i know how you feel, and its great how you let your personal life through in your poetry.,..i can relate and i appreciate you sharing your deepest emotions.
5/5

melissa

Wow, that whole poem showd so much much emotion and so much hurt, glad you found some way to let it out through poetry

that poem made me want to reach out and hug you to make you feel better

amazing writing

brittany (MD)