Comments : When you were Around

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    But I always drift back to a certain familiar sound.
    That beautiful chime of laughter back when you were around.

    That's so beautiful yet so sad.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This poem is so beautiful. Yet very sad. Your emotion in this write are very strong. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So sad.....glad you got a happy ending...

  • 17 years ago

    by Ocean

    Wow i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Hilary Day

    I love this. It's so beautiful. And it says so much. Keep on writing. I enjoy your work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rebekah

    Lovely poem. a good topic to write a poem about too. well done -x-

  • 17 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    That is sweet, I like that. You have a talent in poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    I've tried to move forward with both feet on the ground.
    Spent a few lonely nights solo, by myself out on the town.

    realy relates to me.... you poem is so sweeeet... you realy know what is love feeling. .. and i loved you poem. tkae care

  • 17 years ago

    by kate

    Beautiful, i know how you feel x

  • 17 years ago

    by dee

    Love it.. so beautifully written...

  • 17 years ago

    by Callalilly

    This is a beautiful poem! It is bittersweet! I love it!