Excellent flow and use of vocab
A breath of fresh air..
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Hey,
nice flow and excellent choice of words,
very unique poem,
good work 5/5
kisses,
stephanie

Perfect rhyme scheme and flow....great word choices.....full of emotion

Oh beautys preservation,
Of the sacred human heart,
Love is continuation.
And in you,
Here lies the start.

^ love this last verse.....the beauty of love shines through! All the best, Debbie

I like your word choices in this poem, they were great. the poem it self was a great write. you have done a great job dear.keep it up.

Great beginning and an ending. Beautifully written piece, I enjoyed in it very much.
Third stanza is my favorite.
5/5

Great wording and flow.

I love your poem check out my "I WISH" poem i think you will like it