Omg this is so sad!!!!!! great poem nd very well written. keep it up. =)

Wow i really liked it... very powerful!! good job!! 5/5

Wonderful poem very sad at the end, good flow and well written, great job. your friend Tracy dean
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5/5

Aww thats so sad.great poem.

AWW dat was real so i loved how it was expressed..good job!!Keep writing........

Sad poem but really nice flow. 5/5, Em

Painful experience , sooo sad poem :(
well written 5/5

..and in these uncertainties, we're given to doubt, reason to uphold the Maker_jealously. Know'n Our proposals are left at His disposal. Beautifully sour tale here. Press forward, still.