I love acrostic poems. In this perticular poem I think you definitley got your message acrossed. The flow was lost in a few parts, I know that's hard to keep in acrostics. I loved the idea of the poem though. Good read! 5/5

marcella

I liked this it was so true and sad knowing that its true nice job!

Amen!
Very strong poem. I loved the wording and the thougths behind it. Great job!

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid