Comments : Clock and Conversation

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very complex, yet so short. I always love your work.
    There's not much to say, it's brilliantly written.
    But, This is one poem where the author is the only one that knows what he/she meant by it..You know what I mean? Everyone else gets a different thought about it. So, a title from me wouldn't be what you were picturing, but if it was me, I'd put something like: The Time of Moon
    [Or something about time and moon..incorporate them together?]
    Yeah, hope that helped. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This poem got me thinking alot into what you meant by it. I like that it isn't all just written out and explained for the reader, it's thought provoking, I love that, I enjoy reading these types of poems most, but find them the hardest to write. You have so much talent, keep it up. 5/5

    Tammie