Live these last few minutes in full throttle,
Just go ahead and down the bottle.

YEAHHH NUKKA!!

this is beautiful...great rhythm and rhyme, and I like this rhyme still(aabb) the most. keep it upppp.

I love it. period.

This was awesome but if this is how you feel remeber guys are idiots their brains are incapable of understanding ours....well hell their minds are incapable of understanding anything important lol

What a good read, havnt read anything quite like this before for a while, well written.

october xx

The rhyming was really good, you captured the emotion well

Ok