Difference of opinions aside, the flow of the poem is really good, your rhyming is really nice, the choice of your words is interesting, nice poem.

Really good! it was sad though because that its actually true and stuff nice read! 5/5
*kaila*
a.k.a. your slave lol

Very nice piece of writing and i do agree with you whole heartedly keep it up keep at it

That was sooo good!..i loved it!..and i totally agree with your statement that if you don't write down important things, then they might as well not have happened...but yeah i give you a 5/5....and thanks for the comment