Comments : Poem from an indiana hoosier to poems and quotes

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written as usual keep it up i enjoy reading your poetry and i like getting comments from you they are always positive even if you borrect me on something, another great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Nice write!
    5/5 always
    your favorite friend
    kate

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    NIcely done. It was a good read. Very intresting

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    nice poem,
    the flow is great as well as the rhyming and i really love those lines:

    i hope to stay for much longer, souls to reach
    knowledge to learn, and many others to teach

    good work 5/5

    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    [[i hope to stay for much longer, souls to reach
    knowledge to learn, and many others to teach]]

    My favourite couplet.
    I thought this was cool, it was writing about something most people here can relate to because its about the site. :]]

    Your flow was great & I liked it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow for such a short poem this piece was filled with beauty. I have to admit when I first read the title I wasn’t sure if I’d like it or not, something about the word hoosier just kind of puts me in a weird frame of mind. But I admit this poem was much better than I expected. I am in the exact same boat as you. Poems and Quotes is my home and my playground and I shall frolic here as long as I possibly can. I think that my favourite part was the last two lines they were so beautifully written and showed such passion. Nice work. The only thing that I would change is to make sure that all of your I’s are capitalized, and I would put a period at the very end of the poem just for some closure. But besides that nice work.