The title. bit long but perfect in every way. i loved it. this was great to read. flowed well. and i am honoured to be ther first to comment and vote on this.

5/5 :) David

It's long~ But its GREAT! it has alot of emotion into it which makes it great..everything fell apart together..it flowed well...
Great Job!
4rm~
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