Gorgeously written Cindy
I wish i could say i don't relate but i do and it makes the words seem so much more bittersweet
5/5
*Gem*

This was pretty sad, it was a beautiful poem though and i really enjoyed reading it,
your friend, Tara-Kay

Cindy
You do have such a way of bringing tears to my eyes through your words.

Don't leave me here any longer
This life is so hard to withstand
Closing my eyes, I am ready now
Waiting on the touch of your hand
^^^
Such a touching stanza Cindy!
I really enjoy reading your work ... but I now know to always have some tissue handy.

Take care deary

Oh this was so sad and yet very beautiful. You have lots of friends here who are always thinking about you.
Take care.

We will soar above the tree tops
As we take our finial flight
Looking down on the world below
Disappearing into the night

Absolutely beautiful....well done. Wonderful imagery...filled hope and love. 5/5 Debbie

Very touching write cindy. best wishes

Loving and beautiful! 5/5

GOT me teary... grr... aww... i love you nana! beautifull poetry nether the less... you never cease to amaze

This is another very good poem cindy, but if im not mistaken the title and in the 14th line should be final not finial, but still a 5/5!!! keep writing!!!!

It was sad and seemed a lot like unrequited love but once again the words speak for themselves. It was beautiful.

Ur sad poems has all the power in the world to make even a stone cry. Ur poems are really remarkable

My heart is shattered without you
Wrap me in your arms, fly with me
Away from all this misery
It is your face I need to see

all the best and take care

I just wanna give you a big hug darling. your last stanza is lovely, and really brings the piece together, excellent poem.

Finial is not mis-spelled
Old English meaning for finial- last, on top, or final.

Very sad and heartfelt. Also very unique. For those of you who do not know or did not notice. FINIAL means the end or last and is not a mispelling of final or a typo. Unique title and touching message. Nice job!

Oh! boy.....I am starting to get seriously choked up on your writes....
Incrediable writing.....
even a stone can cry...as has been commented.....

stunningly beautiful......

1000000000000000000000/5
just wow!!!