Awwwwww i really like this one...another excellent poem! good job!

Great poem... Though in this line, "Will his end his own strife?", should it be Will [this] end... I'm not sure lol I just woke up. Good write though. 5/5

marcella

Wow i really liked this i could like picture everything and i'm sure everyone can relate to this in some way definitely 5/5 keep it up
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You get no choice. That will lead to true happiness. And according to the list:

#8. Find true happiness (or the closest thing to it).

So, ha! µ

This was a really good poem i really enjoyed reading it.