Comments : What happened to the girl she used to be

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww i remember you said this poem reminded you of me...except for the whole getting high thing..lol..great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Great poem, it is really good, it reminds me of me, but i know why i turned so bad
    5 from me. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job....keep writing.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This is so true... i accually used to be a good girl too, but i guess i dont know what changed me. it is really good because you are pretty much writing about every girl out there

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Everytime i read one of your poems, it reminds me of myself...
    this one is fantastic...

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is a really good poem. i defiantly really liked it a lot. i think you did a wonderful job on writing it. keep it up 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    Aww..very touching.. I like the meaning of it..very well written..

  • 17 years ago

    by Austin

    This was a great poem, such a powerful message you wrote into it. Everything seems so...horrible...it seems to me...that life just gets harder no.

  • 16 years ago

    by Confused Queen

    I enjoyed ur poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem.I really enjoyed it.It sends a great message also.It also flowed very well which I think is kind of important in a poem.
    I really loved the beggining,

    "She used to be a dancer,
    She'd dance the night away"
    My favorite line^^

    Good well done,5/5,
    Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Good poem. i guess i dont have a lot to say. i think the 'good girls' have it the worst, personally.