Wow you've painted such a picture with your words and created a great image to go with your poem, well done.

O...M...G..... that was amazing. The imagry you use is stunning, and I always love your choice of words!! The flow is great!! Awesome job my friend!! 5/5 (even though it deserves more!)!!

Oh, and btw, you are on my favorites list as well, lol, I like your profile, lmao.There isn't anything to critize here, only what is nous??

Much Love,
<3 Danielle

Love the twist in this and i love the complexity of your emotions and your descreiptive tone..amazing stuff keep it up

melissa

Amazing poem!!! Gr8!! 5/5 definitely!!!