Aawww that's soo sweet. u really put in gr8 detailed. it's beatifully writen:)

I really liked this i could seriously relate to it. wow.

good job.

my favorite line is:
I love you more than life itself
Thatâ??s exactly how it seems
Your forever in my heart
And forever in my dreams

~chelsea

You poem is simply amazing. GREAT JOB!!!!!

I loved it :)

-Erin

Chellsea's leaving!!! She's moving to Ohio. This is the worst day ever. I hate life.

Lol, i think a recognise a few of those stanza's..
Nicely put together though
5/5
*Gem*

A very good poem. Gemma is great for inspiration. She's on my favs...lol...and thank you for all of your comments! Your fifth and sixth stanzas didn't follow the same rhyme scheme as the rest, so I would change that, but otherwise it's a nice piece and my fav style of poetry!
Charisma*

GREAT poem. :D
And thanks for the comment.
And yeah, spell check is retarded.
I do appreciate your comments because I hardly get any! And i am trying to figure out if i am good enough to enter a contest my sister told me about. :/ but idk...

Hey another touching piece. veryheartfelt lot of emtion once again, good wording. keep it up. i really like reading ur poems xx