This poem really touched my heart. I hope the one you love finds her way back to you.

in the mid of nights when
I suddenly awake I found
alone myself thus tears flow
beside the ears and
fall on my pillow with one fear
that life without you i cannot bear

These same feelings come to me...nights are the worst.
Thinking of you. Keeping you in my prayers. Your friend Cindy

So beautifully done dear...its gr8 so touchy i loved it...5/5

God bless u

What a great dedication..could feel ur true love...its really very beautifully written...keep writing

all the best and take care

Its good but you need to organize your thoughts a little more... you seem like you just think of the lines and throw them in there as they pop in your head try takeing some time and when you think of some thing write it down a piece of paper and later put them together so they make sense....but it's good and i like it

That was a lovely poem, you certainly tell us this women is very special, great writing, your message came across strong. xox sam

This was great nice job

This poem is sweet and beautiful. I like the ending of it...your wishes to her become your wife... It is beautiful...Good job..