Comments : Break Down

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This was a good poem!
    =-)
    Keep up the good work!

  • Wow strike 3 thats a out in my book

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    You shot my thoughts like a gun.
    You cut out my heart and sliced it with a knife.
    --fav. part very strong words
    sad situation but good poem