Wow~ There's so much anger and frustration in this poem that it's almost a shock to see how loving the ending is. Great job! Keep it up~

Omg, you have so much feeling i really like it! keep up the good work!

Comment #4

A very powerful piece
I think every teenager and even older can relate to this. The feeling of claustraphobia and being trapped in a house you can't call home is horrible.
Been there =)
Excellent emotion used
5/5
*gem*

So cool and realted with feelings but i advise you something
If you hit enter after every stanza,it would be easier to read
other than that,so beatifully penned
Keep it up
Laura

Your poem is soooo touchingand sooo sad but I LOVE IT well done !! 5/5 BTW i added u to my favs!! :)

Wow when I first started reading this I thought that is should be put under a different category but I was dead wrong. If this isnt a tribute to a friend then I dont know what is.. its true they are there to help us even when we dont know we need the help. wonderful write. The only critique I have is I agree you should hit enter after the stanza and I also feel that you should add a period or a comma after a few lines. Nice work though.

This is another greatp oem loved it keep writing hun

xxx alex xxx